Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Band 8 và Từ vựng chủ đề Society

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Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Band 8 và Từ vựng Ghi điểm theo chủ đề Society

Topic:

Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed.

Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

Band 8 Sample

There is a difference in opinions as to what form of international aid is more effective for third world countries. In my view, support in the form of money shows less practicality than other types of useful aid and consultancy.

On the one hand, I understand why some people argue that it is best to provide financial assistance to developing countries. Firstly, financial aid from developed countries enables governments of poorer nations to implement important infrastructural development, such as healthcare systems, fresh water and power supplies. This can help to avoid stagnation of development and help a country to foster economic progress. Secondly, when state income from taxes is inadequate, foreign cash injections are vital to maintain effective administration systems by paying salaries for government staff members in all sectors of a nation’s government.

On the other hand, I do agree with those who believe that other forms of assistance should be given. Sustainable growth does not merely depend upon money, but on how a country is governed and directed, particularly diplomacy and the resolution of serious issues like poverty, crime, and unemployment. In this spectrum, less developed countries certainly do not have enough experience, which emphasizes the need for direction and consultancy from other more experienced governments and organizations. Furthermore, even if financially supported, third world countries still need experts in the fields of science, law and medicine in order to help maintain their development in such areas. However, scientists, lawyers and doctors can only be trained, and professional and systematic education and training programs are therefore more practical and suitable in the context of developing nations.

In conclusion, owing to the aforementioned arguments, it seems to me that instead of monetarily assisting poor countries, global help should come in other forms such as advice and education.

By ZIM Academic English School

Vocabulary highlights:

  1. Third world countries: Những nước đang hoặc chưa phát triển
  2. Consultancy: Sự tư vấn
  3. Provide financial assistance: Cung cấp hỗ trợ tài chính
  4. Financial aid: Hỗ trợ tài chính
  5. Infrastructure development: Sự phát triển cơ sở hạ tầng
  6. Avoid stagnation of development: Tránh trì trệ
  7. Foster economic growth: Gia tăng phát triển kinh tế
  8. Foreign cash injections: Nguồn tiền nước ngoài
  9. Maintain effective administration systems: Duy trì hệ thống quản lý hiệu quả
  10. Sustainable growth: Phát triển bền vững
  11. Diplomacy and the resolution of serious issues: Ngoại giao và việc giải quyết những vấn đề nghiên trọng
  12. Professional and systematic education and training programs: Chương trình giáo dục và đào tạo chuyên nghiệp và có hệ thống

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